Richie McCaw Sick Sentences

Here are some sentences that i'm going to fix here they are: 

The ball came towards Richie. He jumped into the air. He held out his hands. He was excited.

Now i'm going to fix them up:

The ball came flying with flames towards Richie. I did a enormous jump up into the  air to catch the ball. He ran with his hands out to catch the ball. I was excited to get the ball and get on the field.

Thanks for reading my sick sentences.