Today my writing is about a picture called fish island i have to include this in red like this. They were really moving. They could see ripples forming in the water below.
I'm going to start my writing
One beautiful and sunny day the lake was steady and the humans next door were planting there veges when suddenly they started floating higher and higher. That's when a man that had just finished swimming shouted there a massive fish connected to our island and it's emerging. They were really moving. They could see ripples forming in the water below. They needed to get to higher ground. So they jumped in there bout and speedily paddled to the grassy forest / island next door. Where will this forest take us.
Day 2 Writing
Suddenly i found myself in a spooky forest there was mist surrounding me like a blanket. There was a bridge in front of me it looked old and rusty. 1 part of me told me i should cross it but the other didn't but i still crossed it. I walked across it i stopped and looked down it didn't move and i was just about to take another step but it started shaking like somebody that wasn't me had stepped on it. I looked back and it was a monster i started running like crazy i was so scared i ran across the bridge not remembering what i thought of it at the start. On the other side there were trees on the other side. She thought this is the only way out. There is no turning back now. So she speeded through the woods looking where it was going to take her.
Day 3 writing
Those woods were really prickly I thought. Brushing of the dirt of her cloths she wandered through the woods. Suddenly I stepped on something and it cracked it was a bone they were everywhere There were also routes i followed them and they lead to a tree it looked dead. But the next second a portal opened up it looked like another dimension there was mist surrounding the tree This tree was different to the other trees. It contained magic. I stepped into it half my body i couldn't see because it was in the tree i wondered what was in there i put my whole body in there and i was whisked away to another world.
TO BE CONTINUED
Day 2 Writing
Suddenly i found myself in a spooky forest there was mist surrounding me like a blanket. There was a bridge in front of me it looked old and rusty. 1 part of me told me i should cross it but the other didn't but i still crossed it. I walked across it i stopped and looked down it didn't move and i was just about to take another step but it started shaking like somebody that wasn't me had stepped on it. I looked back and it was a monster i started running like crazy i was so scared i ran across the bridge not remembering what i thought of it at the start. On the other side there were trees on the other side. She thought this is the only way out. There is no turning back now. So she speeded through the woods looking where it was going to take her.
Day 3 writing
Those woods were really prickly I thought. Brushing of the dirt of her cloths she wandered through the woods. Suddenly I stepped on something and it cracked it was a bone they were everywhere There were also routes i followed them and they lead to a tree it looked dead. But the next second a portal opened up it looked like another dimension there was mist surrounding the tree This tree was different to the other trees. It contained magic. I stepped into it half my body i couldn't see because it was in the tree i wondered what was in there i put my whole body in there and i was whisked away to another world.
TO BE CONTINUED
I don't know if I am brave enough to read your next instalment of this story :-)
ReplyDeleteYour story got scarier! Though, if you see a bridge, you have to cross it, so you did the right thing.
ReplyDeleteWOW! Part 3 was really out there! I love it!
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