Wednesday 26 August 2020

Sick vs Healthy sentences

 KIA ORA! 


Hello fellow bloggers her are some sick sentences I am going to make better.

Sick sentences

The big giant opened his mouth and yelled. His big head was a grey colour. He was really big and angry.

I am going to make these sentences better now.

Carelessly, the colossal giant opened his solid rock mouth and yelled. His enormous head was a light shade of grey like a newborn elephant. He was extremely immense and infuriated.

What do you think about when you see this picture?

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2 comments:

  1. Karina G30 August 2020 at 00:44

    I like your use of descriptive words here Neena. Great writing.

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    1. Anonymous6 September 2020 at 19:44

      Hi mum I am glad you like my writing!
      Thank you for commenting on my blog.
      Do you like writing why?
      Blog you later
      Neena

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