Thursday, 23 July 2020

Before and after

KIA ORA once again bloggers!

This post is about improving a post. We had to take a screenshot of a post that we have already posted and then edit it so that it is a better post and has more description. This is my example:
What would you do to improve a post?


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4 comments:

  1. Anonymous30 July 2020 at 17:00

    Hi Neena my name is Jake and I am in room 8 I really like your blog post about before and after. I remember when I did something like this. Make sure to check out my blog at My blog.
    blog you later.

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    1. Anonymous3 August 2020 at 19:34

      Hi Jake thank you for commenting on my blog I am glad you like my before and after.
      Blog you later
      Bye

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  2. Karina G3 August 2020 at 17:58

    Those small changes made a big difference didn't they. As a reader it was much more symmetrical and flowed better.

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    1. Anonymous3 August 2020 at 19:34

      Hi Mum thank you for commenting on my blog I am glad you like my before and after.
      Blog you later
      Bye

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