This post is about improving a post. We had to take a screenshot of a post that we have already posted and then edit it so that it is a better post and has more description. This is my example:
What would you do to improve a post?
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Hi Neena my name is Jake and I am in room 8 I really like your blog post about before and after. I remember when I did something like this. Make sure to check out my blog at My blog.
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Hi Jake thank you for commenting on my blog I am glad you like my before and after.
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Those small changes made a big difference didn't they. As a reader it was much more symmetrical and flowed better.
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